·Please mention how data was collected and give an outline of your main methodology
·Please mention how your findings link with any of the literature you discuss in chapter 2
·You do not mention any recommendations (see feedback for chapter 5)
Chapter 1 – Introduction:
·1.5 Thesis organization, this should be a paragraph explaining what is in each chapter, not titles and then a few lines underneath. Just write a paragraph on it.
Chapter 2 – Literature Review
·OK
Chapter 3 – Methodology:
·The whole point of chapter 3 is tell the reader YOUR choices and explain why YOU have made those choices. For every section of chapter 3 you must say whether YOU have chosen to use it and try to give reasons why. Eg. Experiment approach? Are you using it?? / Survey approach? Are you using it??IMPORTANT
·Please add to chapter 3 your work under your title ‘Chapter 4’. This is definitely work for chapter 3.
Chapter 4 – Findings:
·This ‘Research Analysis’ should be chapter 4
Chapter 5 – Conclusions and Recommendations:
·You must make some recommendations after your conclusions IMPORTANT
